This is something I don't do often.. or ever so I'll probably be pretty bad at it. In fact I'm trying my damnest to be bad at it.. and if you consider the fact that it's not entirely impossible that I'm not just naturally bad at it well.. you'll see.
The Depths
I plunge deeper.
Down
I recognize what I see
I've been here before..
Lived here,
I know this like I know no other
the depths.
I look above but alas,
my struggle is
pointless
Here I remain
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Like I said I was going for ironically bad. So there.
*doesn't look all embarrassed and stuff or anything
8.15.2010
Being all ironic so it's cool.
Posted by Michelle at 12:41
Labels: bad poetry, poetry, Sunday, the depths
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11 comments:
Cool. Disturbing. Bravo! Firstly, your balls are bigger than mine, it takes courage to open up, especially in a poetic way.
I'm assuming this is heartfelt expression, otherwise, what's the point?
Probably wont help, but I'm reaching down towards you, with outstretched hand... can you grasp it (I just washed, it's not dirty) thought I might be able to help you up.
um.. yeah
*looks cool and stuff*
or something
I got it wrong? That's me all over :-)
Changing the subject, the Flickr widget you have embedded in your blog, could you direct me to where it's available, please?
sure.. I originally got it from flickr, though there's something available through blogger now.. I'll check though
and no you didn't get it wrong... at least I don't think so..
it's sorta based on how I feel, though I was mostly just, um, fucking about...
It's called the Flickr badge and you can find it here
http://www.flickr.com/badge.gne
Thanks.
Hope you get back to the 'surface' soon.
kay..
*tries a bit*
maybe tomorrow
You okay? Don't want to be too presumptuous, and I've no special skills, but you know where I am. Okay?
ok.. I'm better.. been drinking vodka and orange and little pickled things which always makes things better.. you know :)
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